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Sedona New Moon Retreat

A Journey to Awaken Your Intuition, Release Ancestral Karma, and Expand Your Consciousness!

September 11-17, 2023

Are you ready for
Transformation, Illumination, & Rebirth?

Are you ready to embark on a journey of self-discovery and personal growth? Then join us on this transformative adventure as we learn healthy boundaries, increase intuition, and expand our consciousness, all while connecting with other like-minded heart based individuals. Hamza, you can leave the current design where it says Are You Ready. All we need to do is just replace the section that says Then Join Us with the section I wrote above. Thanks!

IMAGINATIVE PARAGRAPHS - romance your participants by dropping them into the actual retreat experience.

  • Research the location online and look at photos.
  • Or rewind your memory and remember what it FELT like to be there.
  • Close your eyes and picture yourself at your location. Tap into your senses. What will you see, feel, taste, touch, and hear? Now open your eyes and write down what you imagined, putting your readers into the picture with “YOU” statements.
  • Ask your retreat venue for more info on specific activities.

FIRST BENEFITS SECTION: List four or five pain points and benefits from your Avatar 3 Worksheet.

In most cases, you can use the exact same words you’ve written in your avatar homework, but pacing is important. Make sure your benefits are short and snappy — no more than a few lines each — so your copy moves along at a brisk pace. Alternatively, you can get creative using the suggestions in Video 4, Part 1. But if you do, make sure your text clearly indicates the problems you’re going to help them solve!

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THE VENUE

Be as expressive as possible and do not just copy the text from your retreat center’s or hotel’s website and put it on your page.

This is not the place to sound like Trip Advisor – this is the place to put your reader into the experience, similar to what you did in your imagine sequence in Section 2. So again, be sure to use “you” statements — for example: “You’ll be amazed at the spacious, sprawling accommodations….It’s obvious the owners have designed the rooms with your comfort in mind, with no important detail overlooked.”

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THE CUISINE

Pretty much every retreat center or hotel talks about their food and gives a menu. So all you have to do is use the menu to share what your participants will be experiencing. If you are going to be eating foods that represent the country’s traditions, then talk a little about that! Google any country’s food traditions to get ideas. Make sure you assure people that their dietary needs will be acknowledged and taken care of.

THE CUISINE

Pretty much every retreat center or hotel talks about their food and gives a menu. So all you have to do is use the menu to share what your participants will be experiencing. If you are going to be eating foods that represent the country’s traditions, then talk a little about that! Google any country’s food traditions to get ideas. Make sure you assure people that their dietary needs will be acknowledged and taken care of.

THE JOURNEY (Activities & Descriptive Itinerary)

Here you’ll create beautifully worded descriptions of the daily activities that relate to your promise — without giving your clients an hour-by-hour breakdown or too many details. Make sure you entice folks and let them know WHY you are taking them on those excursions and HOW it connects with the theme of your retreat. Also be sure to include YOURSELF here. Let your peeps know what YOU will be doing to help solve their most pressing problems!
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